IELTS Writing Sample #138
IELTS candidates often make mistake with prepositions when they describe advantages and disadvantages. Choose the correct preposition in these sentences.
1. Speaking fluent English gives young people an advantage over / from other college applicants and job seekers.
2. For / To a student, it is a great advantage to be able to read faster.
3. There are several drawbacks of / to distance education.
4. China has benefited enormously from / with globalization and by opening to the global economy.
5. One of the many advantages for / of social media is being able to reach a large audience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
A company has announced that
it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Give reasons for your answer and
include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Model answer
New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.
I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.
Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.
I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I would miss that greatly.
A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.
(251 words)